Imperatrix Xoco

Right, well, I'll go through line by line. Red for corrections, slashy marks for things that should be cut. I stepped out onto the stone patio allowing the crisp autumn ...

Young adult... um... The Abhorsen Trilogy by Garth Nix was pretty awesome. And, I'm not certain if this is a children's book or teen's, but The Book Thief by Markus ...

Special thanks to music and imperatrix, you guys were fantastic! You helped loads! My pleasure, Tig. *bows* Feel free to shorten my username however you so wish. ;) Imp, Xoco, ...

Okay, so I’ll be reviewing for you today! ;) Before I begin, I must say that you had some spots of pretty good imagery. I had an easy time visualizing ...

Not sure if this really counts, but Eye of Argon was laughably terrible. It was bad enough that I initially mistook it for a parody. Um... The Old Man and ...

Hullo! I’mma critique you today, Dreamworx. (: I want to say right off the bat that I found your prologue to be pretty cute. It caught my interest right away ...

“Fine. Then I’ll just stand here. Breathing.” He leaned forward uncomfortably close and began wheezing loudly. “In. Out. In. Ou – ” I'm pretty sure the fullstop after 'breathing' should ...